The Molecular Structure of My Enemies
The atoms that make up
The molecular construction of ink
The ink that forms
The obscure form of each letter
The letters that make up
The distinct meaning of each word
The word choices that develop
The profound meaning of a phrase
The poem that sings in my heart
And forces electrons to race erratically
Throughout my being
The ink… The letters...
The words… The phrases...
The poem… ...YOU ...and me
We are nothing but
Electrons protons and neutrons
That form the atoms
That individually
We cannot see
Yet here we are...
And here is my poem
I am the poem
The poem is me
We are more alike
Than we are different
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This big gap is filled with
Trillions of atoms we cannot see
There is power in numbers
Just ask any ol’ atom
If lil’ ol’ atoms can gather together
To do all this
Just think what we could do
If we could get on the same page
Copyright 2009 Yobarney AKA Raymond f. Baldorossi Jr
(I tried to put little dots in the gap all spread out... but the Showcase format will not allow it)
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Very thoughtful
and creative construction.
Also, the thoughts conveyed were profound.
One of your best writes, definitely!
United with your thoughts,
Eric
Can you imagine if everyone in the world...
Do you really think it was one of my best??? Because I almost did not post it! Thank you Eric! I wis I could have had those little dots spread out all over the place... the way that I wrote it up! Oh well!
Can you imagine if everyone in the world would work together to achieve common goals in stead of thinking about themselves and being greedy or munipulative! How much more time would we have to put our energy into possitive ideas and inventions if we did not have to deal with all the negative crap in the world!
Thanks for eading and the nice comment!
Ray AKA Yobarney
~Microscopic Love~
Ray,
You are a Ray of hope and light. This little ditty is very witty. My microscopic ink atoms are fusing with yours...it is the essence of eternal love. Eternal bliss...imagine that?
You are one of a kind, and I like it! This would be a fantastic commercial for peace.
Mind Fusion to Prevent Con Fusion,
Kathy
What a beautiful poetic comment!
What a beautiful poetic comment! Thank you so much Kathy!
Ray AKA Yobarney
Mind Fusion to Prevent Con Fusion
I think you are right ... it would be a great commercial for peace .... You should be in marketing ... "Mind Fusion to Prevent Con Fusion"
That's awesome!
Ray AKA Yobarney
I don't know how how you
I don't know how how you come up with your poems but I love them. Let there be peace! Another great poem Yobarney!
Tripo
May peace be with you
May peace be with you Tripo... Thank you for the nice comment!
Ray AKA Yobarney
peace
I hope to see it one day, too. Nice and clever poem, Ray.
I hope to see you in Miami soon!
Thanks Neo... I know we will see it! I hope to see you in Miami soon!
Ray AKA Yobarney