Thank you for sharing this with the world. From those of us who have lost everything: Everything worth loving, anyway. I say thank you. All beauty in the world is dying, but for those like you who have captured what little remains, I say thank you. For what it's worth...

I dont know what it is about this poem... i really enjoyed it i swear i must have read it four or five times lol im obssesed ! its a fanastic poem !
Rosie

This is truly an amazing read. It seems that kind of committment is so rare these days. Giving everything you are to someone regardless. I found myself hoping that she will realize what she has been given and that it happens while he can be her angel here on earth, before death takes him. Absolutely gorgeous.

Justin

if things are really as you say ,
hope angel understands some day,
with a friend just like you ,
she will never have an xcuse to be blue

Raymundo,

You had some wonderful and warm sentiments in this piece. If I am to be perfectly honest there were a few spots where your rhythm got off kilter and it effected the flow of the piece within that section. I realize that it is often very hard to see these things in the stuff we write because we are so personally invested in the piece. Overall real good stuff.

Pete