Perfect Family I of IV: Virtu

Perfect Family
Part I of IV
Virtu

Can you hear that sound
Give it your full attention

Is it building in your head
A pleading cry for help

A distant forgotten love
Crying out to no one

Can you see that painting
Look at nothing else

Is it sewn into your thoughts
A dying excuse for life

A distant forgotten love
Crying out to no one

It’s okay to let it go
Forget everything of time

A dream will always hurt you
Unless you cut into its heart

i read the whole perfect family series...

wow. so deep and extremely well constructed. all four match in line construction, feeling, tone, everything. the message is clear but you leave a lot up to the imagination so the reader can insert his/her own significance. great job!

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