Original Halo Reprise

I…
I really hate to say this
But the evidence we gave them
Was under poor review
Do you think
They will notice
And we smiled and walked away
Twirling songs along the
Ever-winding…
They can hear it on the streets
Talking over all the noise
I still can’t hear you
So…
Is this here where we part
A comic ending start
A few more back-issues
And we’re crossing off the weeks
To see just how
This ends…
I can’t ignore you
You can see me
Hear…
The rain upon my face
The true beginning
A perfect ending
We…
We can go out with a bang
The most perfected
Way of fate
And faith in…
The outcome
Of this burning love
We hate

Jesse

I guess reading this piece so early in the morning wasn't such a good idea, you have my head spinning in far too many directions. Perhaps I will come back later in the day and read it it again to see if I still spin as rapidly.

Your buddy,

Pete

No go or good go

I hope the spin was in my favor.
i would hate to confuse you and spoil your future follow ups to this series

Jesse

Let me make that determination later after I have reread the piece a few times.

Pete

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