January 10th

January 10th

Outside it pours
Rain beats against the window panes

I can’t escape the noise
The screams of those I’ve lost

The fallen and the chosen
Those burning and those praising

All of it is in my head
I see it in their eyes
Living only in my dreams

All the screams inside my head
Echo from my diaphragm

Their voices join as one with mine
As I cut deeper into my chest
Their blood now flows as one with mine

So I will walk with them
In either Darkness or Great Light

As long as I am no longer there alone

The rain will tell a story
And keep my old flesh company

You have the ability to write stuff I would not be able to pull

off, even if I were to try. The abject lonliness and the hunger to be with those who went before you were palpable in this piece Jesse. Really an amazing read.

Pete

for all it's worth...

thanks for the reply, Pete. glad to hear you liked it, even though it's not down your alley. Glad to know you're still keeping my writes in mind.

ps. love the new stuff, though sorry for not commenting, been a bit busy. will get to it though.

0110001000110000101010111100110---Jesse

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