A thin poem

I have to write

these very thin poems

because

my hand hurts

So,

if I make them thin

they look longer

as if I’ve written

much more

than I really have.

And also

it’s easier to read

a short line

than a very long one like I sometimes write when I get that feeling

of

wanting to tell you

the whole story.

But now

this way

You have plenty of lines

To read between.

See what I mean?

It gives you more

chance to invent it yourself

which means

I talk to you and you

talk to me

even when we can’t hear.

What is a poem so thin called?

I got my linear poetic licence now.

So I’ll write

as best I can

and listen for an answer!

Linear or non-linear.

As we say

It’s the thought that counts.

Wow

really original ...and I like the feel of it....

taara

Thank you

Thanks so much ,Kate

Thin Poem

Ed Schw))))artz

Very funny Kate. Now I suppose I'll have to write a fat poem. Thin poems suggest a narrow mind. (just kidding. ) Poeted

Thank you

Thanks so much!Kate

Your Poem

It is very thought-provoking.

A thin neck tie

Hi Kate,

Sometimes a thin neck tie
is just the thing, or even one of those
rope ties--this poem is like that,
it seems to fit in perfectly with all the
other great stuff you write

\\John

Thank you

I value your comments.Thank you,Kate

Thank you

I value your comments.Thank you,Kate

Thin

Excellent - clever.

Thank you

Thank you,Leslie,Kate

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