Lock and Key
In the dim glow of a candle
I discovered an unused key
The lock I've owned for years and years
Guarded by my own decree
I barely glanced upon the silver
Yet my heart was filled with joy
The rusting lock could now be opened
This metal noose no more a toy
But still, my mind, it raced in fear
For just one man may bear this key
And if the wrong shall try their hands
I'd prove to bruise most easily
I've been sure to tuck the key away
Unopened, now, it must be kept
And yet, it seems, a part of me
Has been left feeling inept
I'm saddened by the fact that now
The key will dust, its so forgotten
The lock awaits so patiently
In it's solitude so rotten
One day, I know, a man will come
The key to my heart in his hand
And soon my lock and key will fade
Forever into the sand.
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Rose
This piece has some very nice moments in it, I'm glad I stopped to have a read.
Pete
Pete
Thank you for taking the time to read this poem, and I'm glad you felt it was worth it. I'm honored you think there were nice moments within it. You are a kind soul. Thanks again.
wInTeR rOsE
The end of time does not have enough power to strangle love's hold.
Unlocked
are some of the contents of your heart for all of us to read, with relish. so much beautiful imagery and emotion from the very first line. This is another excellent poem. I so enjoyed it.
Tis true
that my heart has been opened for all to read. Thank you for saying such wonderful things about my poetry and I. You believe my poetry is to be read with relish? That is quite a compliment and I am grateful for it. I tried my very best, and I am glad you could feel the emotion and imagery within my lines. It seems you have read my other works? I would be thrilled if you would leave me more comments =] I am pleased you enjoyed it. Thank you again for leaving a great comment.
wInTeR rOsE
If you are the wind, how can someone else sweep you off your feet?