the beautiful forest
i walked into a beatiful forest
where the trees all waved "hello"
and the wind whistled my name
the rabbits scampered at my feet
as the ducks flew up above
quacking at me
guiding me
to that most perfect spot
along the bubbly water's edge
where fish popped up to kiss my nose
and welcome me
to this most
wondrous place
tranquility.
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Nicely atmospheric!!
Nicely atmospheric, and very creatively worded!! I like the way that you crafted this piece through imagery; delivering such vivid design upon this scenic little place, as well as the manner in which you captured myself, the reader, throughout your passionately articulate references. Peace!!
awesome...
thanks for the wonderful comment and for soaking up the atmosphere!
Take care,
Mark
awesome...
thanks for the wonderful comment and for soaking up the atmosphere!
Take care,
Mark
MMM... PEACEFUL!
I'd like to go there too mark. Where the heck is this place?
I love this sweet write with the fish kiss!
adorable!
love your tender side.
xo
Linda
thank you, dear...so glad you liked this!
I liked the fish kiss too...LOL!
Take care,
Mark
~Overture of Tranquility~
Mark,
I could hear all the sounds that went with this beautiful forest. It would be fun to record this and add the sounds. This is delightful. I love it. It is simple and yet it hit the spot! I think you should write a collection of poetry about a beautiful forest. I want more!
Warm regards,
Kathy
i could probably do that...
write a collection of forest poems...or ocean poems...I like the ocean too. I have written some poems about forests here I believe. I know I've done lots about the ocean.
Thank you for the nice comment!
Take care,
Mark