path

i saw you there
stretched out before me
and looping wildly
from side to side
and up and down
in the distance
you're a sandy path
so soft on the toes
nice and comfortable
broken in...yes
you're my path
just for me
and i'm forever glad
and grateful
that i had the courage
to find you

so many people
choose the paved roads
laid out so neatly
the traffic conforms
just ever so perfectly
into the pattern
the grid
the road they're told
they're supposed to be on
and don't get me wrong
that's quite all right
for them
if that's what they want
what they choose
what feels right to them
like an old pair of sneakers
i respect that

but it's not my path
my path has flowers
and dandelions
all mixed and intermingled
along the way
toads and rabbits
hoppin and boppin
in every direction
and waterfalls yes
that appear out of nowhere
that i can slide down
and there is always a view
of the ocean here
with its waves of mighty blue
so i can keep in tune
with the tides

there's no buildings
no billboards no smog
to obscure my view
of the sun
as i make my way
and the moon is always full
and forever bright
on my path
because i understand
and can wrap my mind
around her many sides
and there's trees
there has to be trees
big tall ones
with goofy faces on them
smiling at me and saying "hello"
and wishing me luck upon
my many journeys

and dogs and cats
yes they must be plentiful
and chipper and playful
and happy and furry
no leashes here
no chance of getting
hit by a car
we are all free!
and the air is so crisp
with just a hint of salt
from the sea
to fuel my passions
and a whispurr of a wind
to dance around me
a celebration
of movement
nothing stays still
on my path

on my path is music
so sweet...melodic
at times
flutes harps pianos
gentle guitar
and yes...drums
there has to be drums
a little loudness never hurt anyone
now did it?
we like to rock on my path
and why wouldn't we?
we're always young here
who wants to grow up?

and my path talks to me
and comforts me
and consoles me
and tells me it's quite all right
to be who i am
and not to think
that i have to be
like all the other travelers
around me
amazing...
all the other travelers on my path
get to go their own way
and nobody crashes!
we take the time
to move around each other
and appreciate everyone's right
to find their own direction

yes this is my path
lined with my stories
and these are the miles
that make up my life.

sounds nice

Like the sound of this utopia; wouldn't mind walking down that path myself.

it's not hard...

but you may have to walk on your hands for part of it. It wouldn't be my path without at least a little silliness, you know...
Thanks for the comment!

denim patches

you have to crawl before you can walk. Belly slide, progressing to a crawl, finally getting the nerve to attempt a step. Good thing for knee patches (not what you think dirty mind lol) all the abrasions from trying to take a step just to be able to stand on the path, elt alone walk it! Very inspirational piece here, plenty of great things, sounds like a wonderful place sure enough! I hope that everyone is welcome and able to find it, sounds just like a little slice of Heaven!~Ron

*"whenever in doubt, dream...inspiration will happen when you least expect it.." r/k 2-2009
http://members.tripod.com/Ron_Kinard

i believe that we can make our own heaven right here on Earth...

but then again...that's my path. The stuff I write about in this poem is not so much a dream as a new perception on reality, which is something I think I have found on my particular pathway. I believe that we do, to a large extent, make our own realties and make our own heaven and hell right here and right now. I choose to make my path a little closer to heaven...
It's really a wonderous thing when you think about it. Everyone on this Earth has their own particular pathway that they were destined to follow, should they choose to do so...and they are all different and unique...so many ideas and inspirations floating around out there! That's what it's all about...diversity...being who you are and allowing others the freedom to follow their own muse.
Wouldn't this world be such a boring place if we all on the same pathway, believing and doing the exact same things?
"Be who you are..."that's my message...and make your own personal world everything that you know it can be.
Thank you so much for reading my poems and for commenting on this. You always have such great things to say.
Now...about those knee patches...hee hee!
Take care,
Mark

Ants

If we weren't individuals, we'd be like ants, all just alike and very boring! Each person has their own path, some choose the good and the right, and vice-versa. Looking back, I've crawled more than I've walked and was carried the rest of the way, I was fortunate enough to be saved at a young age and if it wasn't for Jesus and His path I certainly wouldn't be here to tell about it! Not all of it's easy, there are obstacles out there trying prevent us from finding paradise, it's how we avoid/transverse/move them to be able to stay on the path is what makes us different. It's the positive ones, the dreamers, that make it a much better place to be in the mean time. If everyone would just be themselves and quit "fronting/hating/playing" we would achieve divinity a lot quicker! It's a shame that we have to look forward to dying to get to paradise when we could literally have it here on earth if everyone would just accept the fact we are different and make the best of it! At least in Heaven our worries will be gone and everyone will have the equality/understanding/peace that we can only dream about while we are here! Keep dreaming and keep writing and keep doing your part to make it better for anyone that reads your words~Ron

*"whenever in doubt, dream...inspiration will happen when you least expect it.." r/k 2-2009
http://members.tripod.com/Ron_Kinard

It may sound silly

but I know this path, I've walked it. The sand is so soft, fine, sometimes it's hard to walk in but the texture makes it worth it. I know this place. Well written brought me back to that place I know. Thanks for sharing. raskin

that doesn't sound silly at all...

and it's way cool that you know this path. Thank you so much for sharing that!
Have a great night!
Take care,
Mark

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