let go!
the trickling of
the wind chimes
is so easy to get
caught up into
if you just close
your eyes
and let go
for just a second
of all those things
such baggage
that you've carried
around with you
for so long
on your little journey
drop them here
and lay on back
into the soft sand
and feel the beat
of the water's waves
as you listen
to the perfect music
of the wind
and you absorb
its every tingle
and you feel the spirits
passing over you
ever so calmly
whispurring
in your ear
leading your mind
to that place
where the peaceful
green waterfalls
cascade down upon you
relaxing you
cleansing you
giving you strength
feel the droplets
hit your forehead
and know that
there's nothing
ever so complex
that it can't be
washed clean
by the beauty
and the wonder
of all that is natural
and flowing free
like the coolness
of a northern breeze
in the night
after a long and hot
summer day
just lay on back
let the world go
gently out of focus
and the sounds
of the wind
and the chimes
and the sweet birds
lull you
right into the sense
of all that is
really real
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Really nice,
Love the simplistic flow, I got baggage by the truckload, I'm just away to buy some wind chimes man, my insensce stick I burned earlier wasn't enough. Thanks once more for the inspiration .
Regards,
H.Math
Hmmm...what kind of insense...
I like opium and lavender myself!
Thank you for the kind words!
Take care,
Mark
Damn,
that's where I've been going wrong, just use bog standard nag-champa, lavender and opium is added to my shopping list, let's just hope the shop don't gift wrap that and pack me a cougar in there!
H.Math
sweet and beautiful
whispering....music to my ears
this is lovely Mark.
in my opinion, this is romantic...love it!
xo
Linda
thank you, dear...
glad you enjoyed it!
Take care,
Mark
~I'm With You Buddy~
Whispurr,
Scoot over! I'm coming to join you in the bliss of the blessed chimes. What's really real...is the mood of tranquility hugging us today. Hug back...just hug back. Have a peace filled day Whispurr.
Ting-a-ling-a-ling-ling,
Kathy
i love the sound of wind chimes...
so relaxing and peacful. And thank you for the hug...here's one back for you!
Take care,
Mark
WOW, THAT IS AN ENLIGHTENING
WOW, THAT IS AN ENLIGHTENING POEM, I FELT IT A SHAME THAT BEAUTIFUL POETRY SUCH AS THIS IS BEING READ BUT NO ONE IS COMMENTING BUT I HAD TO, GREAT WORK, FLOW AND STRUCTURE. IF YOU FEEL MOVED, READ SOME OF MY POETRY AND MAYBE LEAVE A COMMENT...GOD BLESS!!!
Thank you...
I will check dome of your stuff out!
Take care,
Mark
great piece
"and know that
there's nothing
ever so complex
that it can't be
washed clean"
I enjoyed this poem. I especially liked the part I quoted. It's something that is so true yet so many people can't see it.
i know...
A lot of people can't see it. I just don't get that! People make life too difficult sometimes.
Thanks for the comments!
Take care,
Mark
great piece
"and know that
there's nothing
ever so complex
that it can't be
washed clean"
I enjoyed this poem. I especially liked the part I quoted. It's something that is so true yet so many people can't see it.