haiku tree
up in the treetop
my wings flap hard in the wind
whistling to the sky
i cling to the branch
a leaf fighting off the storm
trying to stay green
my little treehouse
with nice big windows for eyes
winks at the half moon
back and forth i rock
on the tree's big black tire swing
a boy and a man
against the tree trunk
blowing bubbles from my wand
magic hits the air
my roots run way down
into the cool deep and dark earth
reaching for my home
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imagination Mark. I especially liked the tire swing one and the last one I found very touching. Haikus are fun. raskin
thank you, raskin...
they are fun...
if I could have figured out how to do it on this site, I would have spaced them out so they kinda looked like different parts of the tree. I did start at the tip-top and work my way down to the roots, though!
Take care,
Mark
nice
a lot of joy here. I format my poems a bit different on my computer than here, it is a bit restrictive. My kids want me to print them all off, I think that is funny. They will read them and think what was she thinking. I like the tree idea for these that would look great. raskin
haiku
I liked the last one best. I dig it when you Haiku.
perhaps i should haiku about digging...
hee hee! don't mind me...i'm just getting over being sick!
Thanks for the comment!
Take care,
Mark
Sweet story
travelling through the pages, I really like these haikus Mark-simple yet refined :D ♥
Thank you for coming along on the journey.
These were fun for me to write. I wrote them all on a mobile device.
Take care,
Mark