haiku tree

up in the treetop
my wings flap hard in the wind
whistling to the sky

i cling to the branch
a leaf fighting off the storm
trying to stay green

my little treehouse
with nice big windows for eyes
winks at the half moon

back and forth i rock
on the tree's big black tire swing
a boy and a man

against the tree trunk
blowing bubbles from my wand
magic hits the air

my roots run way down
into the cool deep and dark earth
reaching for my home

A light and free

imagination Mark. I especially liked the tire swing one and the last one I found very touching. Haikus are fun. raskin

thank you, raskin...

they are fun...
if I could have figured out how to do it on this site, I would have spaced them out so they kinda looked like different parts of the tree. I did start at the tip-top and work my way down to the roots, though!
Take care,
Mark

nice

a lot of joy here. I format my poems a bit different on my computer than here, it is a bit restrictive. My kids want me to print them all off, I think that is funny. They will read them and think what was she thinking. I like the tree idea for these that would look great. raskin

haiku

I liked the last one best. I dig it when you Haiku.

perhaps i should haiku about digging...

hee hee! don't mind me...i'm just getting over being sick!
Thanks for the comment!
Take care,
Mark

Sweet story

travelling through the pages, I really like these haikus Mark-simple yet refined :D ♥

Thank you for coming along on the journey.

These were fun for me to write. I wrote them all on a mobile device.
Take care,
Mark

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