In The Blink of an Eye
In The Blink of an Eye
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Breeze blew over
my body that night
Silently standing
within the twilight
Looking up
toward the stars
my mind wandered near
and then wandered far
Thinking of a place
I didn't want to be
Lost deep
in a dark society
Tears fall down
I bend my knee
and wondered why
I could not see
The ache in my heart
grew so very heavy
with thoughts
of madness
that swirled like
on so many
nights
before
Tormenting me
as I walked out
that door
Drowned in anger
and deep despair
Calling out
but no ones there
With heavy heart
sinking into sadness
I do perceive
that life for such as I...
is over now
in the blink of an eye.
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{c}2009
Wayne Leon Learmond
In The Blink of an Eye
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you definately penned the emotion here. Well done.
Thank You
'In The Blink of an Eye'
Thank you for reading and commenting my friend.
Much appreciated. Thank you.
Dark Wishes
Wayne Leon
do I see light?
Seems to me there is little darness here, at least the light prevails (the way I see it, the remorse is evident) wonderful pen, this is a very enjoyable read, good flow and great emotion! BRAVO!
dark dreams and darker nights...Ron
*"whenever in doubt, dream...inspiration will happen when you least expect it.." r/k 2-2009
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Thank You
'In The Blink of an Eye'
Thank you for stopping by and reading, Ron. Much appreciated.
Dark Wishes
Wayne Leon
unheard
This is a really sad poem, feeling your life is over. Calling out and not being heard. Sad but I liked it :(
Thank You
'In The Blink of an Eye'
Thank you for reading and commenting. I do appreciate it.
Dark Wishes
Wayne Leon