Ocean Eyes
The blue lagoon resting
Against the curved tip of your eyes
Seems very tempted to swell,
And lay upon my dimpled lips.
And as this liquid dream
Gets traced in my recall,
Like your hands' sketch on my waist,
I choose to stay closer
And remain mirrored
In your ocean eyes,
In those timid crimson tides-
I glimmer like a handsome moonlight.
Waters settling in its bend-
Too eager to fall.
Too impatient,
Too weary,
In its waiting
For my goodnight kiss.
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Timeless
This is wonderful Eric. Your writing style here reminds me of Neruda. It is sparse and yet passionate. One of my favorites of yours so far....timeless.
Thank you
Jill, thank you for that awesome comment.
You really made my day!
I admire Pablo also, I find his writing passionate and colorful.
It's a huge compliment that this reminded you of his works.
I thank you dearly!
Eric
really enjoyed
this poem i liked the delicate description its was great :)
I'm so happy you did.
It's nice to see you here again. :)
Thanks for commenting!
Eric