More Or Less

You asked me-
To be less of that
To be less of this
To be more like them
To be less like us

You told me-
To be less of a fighter
And more like a lover
To touch you like a flower
And hold you like a feather

You insisted-
I talk less
And do more
Just listen and listen
I seemed such a bore!

You said-
Be more learned
Read more books
Less night with the boys
Less time to snook

Be a lamb at day
And be a tiger in bed
Be a singer, be a writer
'Be more than more' you said

And so I became-
More of what you wanted
More hits than miss
More of 'these and those'
Less of 'dis n dis'

After a while-
You wanted
Less of my love
And more of my friendship
Less of my kisses
More of companionship

And when I begged-
For more time,
For more open doors,
For a bit more of mine
For a lot less of yours

You replied-
Much less of words
Much less of tears
Just a bunch more silence
Deafening my ears

Then, suddenly-
I just grinned...
More, more and more
As I realized there's less
I really need you for

For you dumping me that way
Did me more of a help
Because, the me that you're hating
Was less of me
And more of yourself!

I can relate

Wow. That sounds eerily similar to my last relationship. I couldn't help but nod and smile at the memories of being told to change everything about me, then being told that wasn't good either. Haha, some people just project thier own insecurities, right? Nicely written!

April

I guess

it's universal.
There would always be people who will demand you to change,
and, if you are too in love with that person... without even
realizing it... you eventually fall into their cliche.
Until, you don't even know who you are...
Until, they leave you just because you're too much of what they're wanting.
Thanks for commenting on this Apryl!
Thanks for the kind words!
Eric

silence

is really deafening.
silence brought about when she seldom talks to you.
or silence brought about your waiting for her to text or call you.
it's really painful.
anyway, nice writing,!
maybe the one who's dumping in the poem should ask the feeling of the other.
GODSPEED!
.ART.

Art

As time passes on, more and more we learn.
Silence, can be hurtful...
but, if you look deeper,
you'll see it can be healing as well...
Rough times make people tough...
Tougher...
All the best!
Thanks for the comment.
Eric

your sweet way with words...

See what poetry can do for us? Just writing this wonderful poem helps you realize that is was better to move on and to be your own person. You cant be what someone else wants you to be.

You can only be yourself.
I like you eric.
I like your writes! You have a sweet way with your words.

xo
Linda :)

More or less..

I am now decided... on what to do...
Yes... poetry does help a lot...
I feel like all painful emotions I feel has a purpose
Other than growing as a person...
And that purpose is poetry...
Makes it much easier...
Less painful...
More hopeful...
More or less... :)

Thanks for the comment Linds!
Appreciate them!
Eric

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