Forgive My Oxymorons
This is much real,
Than the poetry I write,
I will not compare this,
To a dark cloud hanging behind
The silver sun,
Or a flock of birds,
Flying above an endless crimson tide,
Over mountains and grasslands,
Just to find the driest piece of land.
This is my truth you read,
More than that of a misplaced growl,
Of a tiger deserted in a
Rainforest of loneliness.
Not just another fearless fire blazing across
Towns of dreamy passion.
This is all of me you now see.
My flesh, bones and blood.
Not just about waterfalls of tears,
Oceans of rose petals,
Orange dusks and crystal dawns,
Or blackest inks and smoothest paper.
It’s more than all the similes,
Metaphors and personification.
Alliteration and oxymorons.
This is ‘us’ I am talking about.
You and me, and the real world.
Not just another inspiration.
Not another piece of my so called ‘art’.
You’re more than that.
This is real.
My love is real.
Yes, I am a poet.
But I am also a man-
Simply hurting for his woman.
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I dig the depth...
Hey, I dig the depth of this ever-so-romantic piece. It sort of came straight at me as I read it...and successfully delivered a very passionate and adequate statement in regards to your situational position. Contradiction looms heavy...great for poems. I consider this a fine write. Thanks for posting!! J.P. (Rex)
Rex,
Thanks for your kind and insightful comments.
They help me a lot.
Thanks again, buddy!
Eric
Poets are so passionate...
You're quite the romantic... She means more to you than words can describe... Just throw them all away... Throw everything out of the way... Show your naked soul brother... Poets are so passionate... you are definately a poet!
Great write!
Ray AKA Yobarney
Ray,
Thanks for the comment and advice.
I certainly take them into heart. :)
Yes, these words are just words if not for my inspiration. :)
Thanks kindly!
Eric
Just you
it must have taken a lot to write this Eric, just exposing yourself in your poem and the pain you feel...your best I've read :) ♥
Jewel,
Thanks for taking the time to read and comment.
Nice to see you here again.
:)
Eric