'I Love you' is Eight letters and so is Bullshit

Brown hair, blue eyes
with a love for the world.
I'm intellectually engaging
and always curious to know.

I'm strong and independent
and usually quite guarded.
My life was in control,
I was doin' just fine on my own.

Then you found me,
and told me I was special,
that I was different from any other,
I was what was missing in your life.

You looked into my eyes,
And I believed you,
took you into my heart
and let you into my life.
How was I just another girl?

Can you tell me why
you lied to me?
Why you left me here,
all alone?

Can you tell me why
you came to me,
when your intentions clearly
were not pure?
Why couldn't you just be happy with me?

I just wanna know
what made you think it was ok
to break my heart to pieces
all over again.

You were supposed to be different,
open my eyes to true love.
You were supposed to be my best friend,
but you gave it all up.

Can you tell me why
you lied to me?
Why you left me here,
all alone?

Can you tell me why
you came to me,
when your intentions clearly
were not pure?
Why couldn't you just be happy with me?
How could I have been just another girl?

Well now I've learned my lesson,
you had your shot.
I'm leaving you for good now,
say goodbye to what you've lost.

Baby, ‘I love you’ is eight letters,
but so is what you're full of...
BULLSHIT.

=]

I like it! Sad, realistic. I LOVE the title, and the last line!!! That's what drew me in! I'm sorry if this was written from experience, becuz thats not something no one wants to go through. But it did lead to this poem...=/ A curse and a blessing. Good job with this!
wInTeR rOsE

Truth,

I was checking out some of your writes and came to this, I am sorry you went through this.I know firsthand how hurtful lies can be, they leave bruises when they are uncovered. But this title, such a great phrase, I just had to comment-Lee

Thank you for your

Thank you for your comment... I hold truth in its highest regard, and so it really sucks that so many people can so easily lie. But thank you for your kind words!-Tara

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