Take Mi Hand
i need you in mi lyfe,
i need your love and affection.
take mi hand.
the way your eyes fall on mine,
makes me feal quezzy.
and the way your lips always find mine,
oh so easy.
take mi hand.
i cant fight this fealing,
this fealing of love.
it burns down inside of me,
like a thousand suns.
i need you now.
take mi hand.
im scared to tell you.
so scared for you to know.
the truth about how i feal.
i need mi heart to heal.
take mi hand.
baby i want you,
baby i need you.
so take mi hand,
and lead me to paradise.
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Very Good
I enjoyed your poem very much. I could feel the emotion in it and the want for love. This was very good and keep up the good work.
Thank You
Well I appreciate your opinion on my writing.It actually means alot to me because I very rarely get taken seriously about my work because I'm so young, so with all my soul.Thank-you =]
<3Cherish Faith