WTF MAN!?!
W hy was I chosen to live out these days
H ating my life in so many ways
A lone if by choice or not mine to make
T rying to cope wish my life I could take
T oday I am evil, I'm mean and I hurt
H elpful to others, fuck off I say curt
E veryone must do what they feel is best
F ailing miserably at life's little tests
U nder the weather brain on overload
C hildren will learn as they go on their roads
K illing me slowly my life is my death
M eaning: for me I die more with each breath
A gain I will plod on this course that is mine
N earing my end when it comes so sublime!
Alfie P. 7/30/08
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OH Man
You sure sound like you are hurting.It is a good write I hope the venting helped.
Gloria
that's life
I am Gloria but it's my life so I have to live it. The venting did help a little but now have to go through the next phase...the calm down and tears....{sigh}....Thanks for reading and commenting.
Stay well, One love and God bless!
Alfie
Life is a beautiful thing! There's so much out there to enjoy, and all you have to do is reach
out there and grasp it. Don't hold yourself back, man. Life is too short. Enjoy every moment of it!
thanks
I truly wish it was that simple as making a choice for me...I thank you for the encouraging words.
Stay well, One love and God bless!
what a sonnet!you put the sun in to it!
brilliant!and could be put on someones wall as a calander or better work of art like walking around being displayed on t shirts.its fan dabi dozy!as we scots say.cheers.
lol
A t-shirts or a calander huh? I can see it now...me and the smiley face right next to each other on store racks...his telling us "shit happens" and mine stating 'WTF MAN!"....lol...thanks for the comment!
Stay well, One love and God bless!
great....
this was a heck of a read....I felt it and it was really well thought out, I enjoyed it, peace
Thanks
Thank you Repenter. It was one of those days....ummm, which coincidentally, is everyday...lol....Hope all is well with you and you continue to find inspiration for writes!
Stay well, One love and God bless!