Camp Visit
Riding down the highway, tire hum is all I hear
sunny skies, no puffy clouds, this summer day is clear.
Down gravel road we pull, and park on grassy knoll
we have to walk, how many yards, still on a rocky road?
We listen to the rules, obey or leave the grounds
anxiety, it now kicks in, I sense my son around...
Dismissed to start the day, I go looking for my boy
I turn a corner, there he is, my heart now fills with joy!
We embrace each other long, being his first time away
from what he tells, and all I see, I now wish I could stay.
Another path we've taken, my breath the beauty takes
With a yelp, and a huge splash, my son jumped in a lake!
I wish I could have joined him, but my health does not allow
With children laughing, my sons smile, a frown won't cross my brow.
We continue with our plans, moving to the next event
unfortunately, it's at this point, my energy now spent.
I don't think I can make it, through a full day here at camp
pain sets in, a sweaty mess, my clothes become all damp.
Once again it seems, my health always ruins things
a golf cart pulls up, beep beep beep, c'mon now y'all jump in!
We go to see his bunkhouse, I'm preparing for a mess
but what I find, is neat and clean, do this home and I'll be blessed!
continuing our tour, I can smell the cooking lunch
by his face, and tummy growls, he can too is my hunch.
After lunch was had, we continued on our way
now it's midday, wow it's hot, how can these children play?
but youth it seems resilient, to the forces all around
not one child, complained of it, laughter the only sound.
Meeting all his friends, my heart feels full and proud
compliments, are given him, by other children loud!
To hear it from adults, I expect this from my seed
to hear it often, from his peers, remarkable indeed.
The day is winding down, parents tears start freely flowing
the waves goodbye, a sob or two, while everyone gets going.
I'm not feeling sadness, in fact I'm rather glad
we bonded more, father and son, at that I can't be mad.
Back on the lonely road, heading back to my own state
even with pain, smile still there, inside I'm feeling great.
I'm happy he has gotten, such an opportunity
to find himself, and create, some lasting memories!
Alfie P.
7/20/08
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good thoughts for your son,
good thoughts for your son, childen can be a true joy, very nice
Thanks
Thanks for taking the time to read and comment Aquadreamer and I fully agree. They are a source of great joy....and some headaches too....lol....
Stay well, One love and God bless!
BRILLIANT!
Alfie, this is awesome. i just love it and i think you should print it out and frame it for your son so he will always know how happy you are for him, and how proud you are of him!
what a great write. this is getting gooooood!!!
Linda
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Thanks Linda
I might actually do that for him because he loves when I write things he can read....I don't let them read all my writes, but they do enjoy reading the "fun" ones. Thanks again for the kind words...
Stay well, One love and God bless!
VERY GOOD
you should be writing scripts with your natural flow of feeling into rime sort of way.you press the right buttons with those gifted fingers of yours.so keep it up pal!cheers
Hmmmm
Scripts you say? For like TV or movies? I don't think too many people would watch a show or movie where every line rhymed...lol...but it might be worth a shot...
Stay well, One love and God bless!
thankfull reply
Havent you ever saw bob hoskins 1pennies from heaven"?it was a musical in most parts but interspersed by great ad-lib like send ups.i think everyone likes rimes and it is the easiest way to teach our kids as anyone can observe!1 commercial and they all know the words.some great songs i now hate as it does get annoying but words wisely never lose thier own tune,kina!Your the man.cheers