Inspirit ~Inert Interlude~
Your voice rang with overtones of love, compassion, joy, satisfaction, and brevity
in my mind, which made it all the more sweeter. Your warmth dawned on me like the sun,
and the breath of life rose in me. Stirred, it spoke, Just let it unfold. What future should
it be, couldn't it be sweeter, be better? Everything was possible with an embolden heart.
How ever brief mattered naught, only the brusque intensity, as I knew from the start
The peril of dangling between Heaven and Hell.
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To hang in the balance...
I like the intensity of this...for someone to effect you, to move you to the point that your emotions hang in the balance...what incredible impact. Love like this gives everything new meaning...and no matter the time period or outcome ...those that come to shine a light on our lives...leave us changed....great write.
Jill
Evanescent
Thank you, I'd like to say... life, love, death, suffering, and joy are all like a match.
A moment, only an optimistic fleeting moment ; )
Thanks Jill
Series
I think it is interesting when
writers create a series of poems
along a theme. This one reminded
me of the seasons and I'm not sure
why but I like the creation.
raskin
Probably
A relationship is like a year with passing seasons. I wrote this one in turmoil as i reflected upon our baptism of love, when we first met. Then I wrote of the condemned feeling of loneliness at a tryst's end. and finally relived the sweetness of those blissfully sweet moments we shared in the troughs of passion. So much like the moon, it's scary sometimes hehe Thanks raskin, always a pleasure
awesome
Nice, the play on presence was welcoming. Very nice.