My First Poem

Love

Love, a word I hear too often
Hate, a word that is my life.
I love to hate, and hate to love
and one thing I hate is love.

Once there was a time
when love was mine, and I was his
over now, forever
but I can't live again.

He said so much,
so many lies
all of love, and all of devotion
but now I know
that love is a lie.

I know that he once was with me,
but not his heart,
never his heart.

Mine belonged to him,
his belonged to Hell.
Where you can lie,
and love to lie,
where love is a lie.

Once there was a time,
when I believed,
but all was broken
that one night.

Love, a word I hear too often
Hate, a word that is my life.
This life of mine is a lie
And how can you live a life of lies?

Emotion

The emotion in this poem is clear and touches the heart. You have created a masterpiece.

The cloud may hide the sun, but it cannot last forever.
wInTeR rOsE

I Agree

I agree with Winter Rose, your work is good. I'm looking forward to reading more from you.
Dave

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