Frothing Slugs of the Nightwalk Carcasswork

frothing slugs of the nightwalk carcasswork
slitherlessly to dream of the fuel
serviced a beaten bray beneath
a curse of thornpaths
steaming paths finite
after none choking drop
of a hammerhead

how unusual...

I gotta say, this one made me wonder.
very interesting way of writing,(in a good way) :)
peace

Hello, Repenter!

Thank you so much for reading and commenting my poem! The fact that you find my piece unusual and interesting is an incredible compliment to me! I have an interesting way of putting words together,I agree with you! ;) I'm glad this piece made you stop and wonder for a moment;that is what matters most to me! thanks my friend!
Peace :)

-Ant

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