catch 22

water flowing
catching
a leaf floating

a waterfall
tumble down
a whirlpool
swirl around

direction
trapped
the leaf

having been
free

before this
never ending
journey

destiny awaits

thoughtful

spartan words but you describe a beautiful scene one I can relate to on a few different levels. raskin

yes, I agree... the severity

yes, I agree... the severity kinda goes with the being jerked around in life idea - this was written a long while ago, in a time I can remember but can't necessarilly recapture fully.

Thanks for reading and commenting :)

Tempestan

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