In This Early Autumn
A long long way !
It leads to saffron cloud
Autumnal sky
(in Japanese)
Utukon no
kumo ni mukaeru
tohji kana
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A cotton candy
It's like light snow
--- melted my childhood
(in Japanese)
Watagashi ya
awayuki no goto
osanaki hi
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The deceased person's garden
is as quiet as ever
in the autumn's rain
(in Japanese)
Nakihito no
niwa sizumoreru
aki no ame
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A wild grapes !
its purple charm so deepens
keeps herself secret
(in Japanese)
Nobudo ya
iro fukakereba
himetariki
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each one, beautiful. I especially like the cotton candy one, equating melting snow with the way the sugar melts in your mouth, great. Good reading this morning. raskin
To raskin
Dear raskin;
Thank you for your comment. I'm happy.
So it is rather diffocult for Japanese me to write a haiku in English, and also to write English style poem.
Tadami Yamada
I'm sure
it is lovely to hear the words in Japanese. raskin