The Morning Star

When every flower on Nature's lap
Spends last phase of its serene nap.
When silent dew falls on my lawn,
While on my bed I stretch and yawn.
When through the window I softly pry
The cloudless, glowing morning sky.
Then beyond the houses not so far
I see the twinkling morning star.

- Sushil Soni

~Morning Light~

Sushil Soni,

May the morning star grace you with the light of a beautiful day!

Not so far, the morning star. Just imagine, that is the same morning star that I see.

Blessings from California to India my friend. It is wonderful to rise to your rhyme and reason.

Warm regards,

Kathy

Yes, Kathy, that's the same

Yes, Kathy, that's the same star you and I see.
Warm regards,
Sushil

Your "Star" poem

Really enjoyed reading this poem. Lovely description, makes the reader feel what you felt.
Thanks...

Thank you, Sharon, you are

Thank you, Sharon, you are so wonderful.

If you have felt what I felt pouring out these feelings, then I think I have suceeded in putting across what I wanted to say.

Warm regards,
Sushil

Thanks right back to you

You certainly have succeeded in putting across your thoughts. (And, how do I get you on my buddy list? Can't figure this out yet.)

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