Swan`s song

Like the last leaf on a windy Autumn day
I hang on, fragile but courageously
Waiting for the day to come
When the wind will stop blowing
So that I can be at peace

At peace with myself and everything around me
At peace with the world and all that it bears
Hanging onto a hope that is based on dreams
Hoping that my dream of surviving all adversity
Will finally be realized

But alas the wind is too strong
And like all other leaves before me
I begin to sing , so long

Sad and lost filled with despair
No one to comfort me
No one to care
No one to say, hang in there, be strong
So I’ll whisper my good-byes, and sing
My swan's song

There's a lot of pain in

There's a lot of pain in this poem. I feel your sorrow in every line. There's also a lot of abandonment here, too. This is a good write. Poetry is a good medium to express these feelings in. NSF

Thank you NSF

Thank you for you`r comment i wasn`t guna post it as i wasn`t sure if any one would like it,
I always get the feeling that ppl will get annoyed reading my poems as i think there rubbish,
so getting positive feed back is amazing thank you again tc.
S.P xoxox

Courageous

SP, your poems are never rubbish, they are beautifully moving and filled with courage. I always read them.

DeBs
xoxo

Thank you

Thank you very much Debs tht means alot 2 me,
Theres more where this one came frm hun
tc
xoxox

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