if life was just a game

Just a game
No responsibility...
No duties...
No work...
No studies...

No pain...
There is nothing like pain,
because we would just play game

Blood would be just ketchup
Tears would be just salt-water

Death will be just game over
tommorow you would start again
if you were in the mood

if you were boring you would stop it
for a while or forever as you would wish

But... Don´t ask about the sence of the game
because you would decay our foolish play

hmm very clever

I like this...very different and clever!
what if....life is really just a game....???
nice write, sininen
Linda

thank you Linda

for your reply, sometimes I wish lots of things and feelings weren´t true and I stop exist...I think many people sometimes feel like that...I think that very different parts in my poet are two last verses...Where I wrote, that there is no meaning in life if it wasn´t real...What do you feel about that?

sininen....

I agree with you there. If we didnt have the misfortunes that happen in life, we'd never know true happiness.
it's just hard when the unfortunate things do happen, we wish they wouldnt...jeez, im getting all confused now...LOL
anyways, i love the poem great job!!!
Linda

I love it

A very interesting read, cleverly done and it makes you think....keep it up!

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