Crush
When butterflies collide at da bottom of my abdomen in my belly because of the sensations felt by my heart,its defined as a crush,but I wasn't crushed by the thought of him that made me blush.....my fall was unrehearsed,but I rehearsed what my lips would recite from the script of my heart. He's my soul seed,watered by thoughts of what could be,should be,would be,and grows each day into a yearning bringing forth fruits of desire and lust and falling to a spirit who knows not how I feel. His eyes,da window to his soul,but it was his mouth that spoke of it,a soul that matched mine. Can u read in between the lines,and pick out the collision of the butterflies at the bottom of my abondomen in my tummy and make my heart content?
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Nompumelelo
Hello,
As a suggestion: try not to write in abbreviations as if you were txt some on the phone: "bcz of da" or "hu knws nt hw i feel". It really gives nothing to the content of the poem. It is not considered style. Plus it takes away from the flow of the poem by having to stop and figure out what you are trying to write.
:)
ron
"It ain't what they call you, it's what you answer to." W.C. Fields
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thank you
thanks ron...im going to fix that now now