Undetermined

I am falling
I am crawling
I am burning
I am drowning

I am fine
I am fine
I am fine
I am fine

I am running
I am waiting
I am crying
I am dying

I am fine
I am fine
I am fine
I am fine

I am lieing
I am faking
I am tearing
I am breaking

I am fine
I am fine
I am fine
I am fine

I am failing
I am fading
I am bleeding
I am ending

I am fine
I am fine
I am fine
I am fine

I am cold
I am withering
I am sad
I am triping

I am fine
I am fine
I am fine
I am fine

I am covered with lies
I am twisted in hate
I am cracked within this shell
I am chained at these ties

I am fine
I am fine
I am fine
I am fine

I am blackness
I am the shadows
I am hiding
I am frightened

I am fine
I am fine
I am fine
I am fine

I am lingering
I am alone
I am pulled at the seams
I am living through dreams

I am fine
I am fine
I am fine
I am fine

Nice Write!

I really like this piece Amanda. I like the layout of the stanza's, and it makes for quite a powerful read.

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