"My greatest fear"
Enjoy...
Post #3
where am I,
can you guess?
I'll give you a little hint.
there is blackness all around me,
no colors, grays or tint.
six inches of space- to my left,
six inches to my right.
my heart begins to pound real fast,
my mind is full of fright.
the walls are padded which is nice I guess
I have a pillow beneath my head.
my bodies lying prone,
they thought that I was dead.
But I was only sleeping,
my eyes were closed real tight.
this is just a big mistake,
"this can not be my plight".
No one hears me when I scream,
cause there is- no one around.
everyone has gone away,
it makes a muffled sound.
have they all forgotten me?
my fingers turn blood red
my fingernails have all fallen off
I scream "I AM NOT DEAD"!
My screams are LOUD and F.RA..N...T.I..C now,
no hope of being saved.
louder, LoUdeR, LOUDER still
is how I RANT and RAVE!
I have "claustrophobia",
it must be "taphephobia"
do you know just what that means?
please, PLEASE! tell me why.
no one can hear my screams.
where am I now,
have you guessed it yet?
in a puddle of my own sweat.
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Startled now, I suddenly wake,
was this nightmare only in my head?
I sit straight up,
with a nervous laugh...
"Whew" ... "I'm only in my bed".
© David W. Smith 2009
davidsmith03@comcast.net
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pretty kool
In a puddle of your own sweat lol,I like that part.nice flow good rhymes.nice poem!
Ricklovin
thank you
I woke up one night with this poem stuck in my head, I actually had the dream. It wasn't as intense as the poem is, but it did give me the inspiration.
there are about 5 or 6 of my poems that have been inspired by dreams. Its amazing how God works.
read my next one this too was inspired by a dream. "Berkisi"
Ill put it up today. I actually woke up crying when I had this dream. "Berkisi" is about my self, Or what I could become.
thank you for your comments seriouslydave.
Nightmares
are great inspiration for some incredible dark poetry! You've done well Dave, go back to sleep and write more! ~Ron
*"whenever in doubt, dream...inspiration will happen when you least expect it.." r/k 2-2009
http://members.tripod.com/Ron_Kinard
Man, I love...
...those comments, thanks Ron and Rick. (and all for reading my stuff) and especially for commenting on it. I get more inspiration to write when people are thoughtful enough to add their own commentary. Good or bad. uh, but mostly the good. lol
-keep reading and I'll keep posting.
seriouslydave
Please comment, I thrive on others words of inspiration.
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If you think this poem is good, wait, my other one is better.