"My greatest fear"

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Post #3

where am I,
can you guess?
I'll give you a little hint.
there is blackness all around me,
no colors, grays or tint.

six inches of space- to my left,
six inches to my right.
my heart begins to pound real fast,
my mind is full of fright.

the walls are padded which is nice I guess
I have a pillow beneath my head.
my bodies lying prone,
they thought that I was dead.

But I was only sleeping,
my eyes were closed real tight.
this is just a big mistake,
"this can not be my plight".

No one hears me when I scream,
cause there is- no one around.
everyone has gone away,
it makes a muffled sound.

have they all forgotten me?
my fingers turn blood red
my fingernails have all fallen off
I scream "I AM NOT DEAD"!

My screams are LOUD and F.RA..N...T.I..C now,
no hope of being saved.
louder, LoUdeR, LOUDER still
is how I RANT and RAVE!

I have "claustrophobia",
it must be "taphephobia"
do you know just what that means?

please, PLEASE! tell me why.
no one can hear my screams.

where am I now,
have you guessed it yet?
in a puddle of my own sweat.

________

Startled now, I suddenly wake,
was this nightmare only in my head?

I sit straight up,
with a nervous laugh...
"Whew" ... "I'm only in my bed".

© David W. Smith 2009
davidsmith03@comcast.net
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Yours David W. Smith

pretty kool

In a puddle of your own sweat lol,I like that part.nice flow good rhymes.nice poem!

Ricklovin

thank you

I woke up one night with this poem stuck in my head, I actually had the dream. It wasn't as intense as the poem is, but it did give me the inspiration.

there are about 5 or 6 of my poems that have been inspired by dreams. Its amazing how God works.

read my next one this too was inspired by a dream. "Berkisi"

Ill put it up today. I actually woke up crying when I had this dream. "Berkisi" is about my self, Or what I could become.

thank you for your comments seriouslydave.

Nightmares

are great inspiration for some incredible dark poetry! You've done well Dave, go back to sleep and write more! ~Ron

*"whenever in doubt, dream...inspiration will happen when you least expect it.." r/k 2-2009
http://members.tripod.com/Ron_Kinard

Man, I love...

...those comments, thanks Ron and Rick. (and all for reading my stuff) and especially for commenting on it. I get more inspiration to write when people are thoughtful enough to add their own commentary. Good or bad. uh, but mostly the good. lol

-keep reading and I'll keep posting.

seriouslydave

Please comment, I thrive on others words of inspiration.
feel free to add me to your friends list.
If you think this poem is good, wait, my other one is better.

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