Fill Your Hand, You Sonofabitch!
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I have therefore removed all my poems from my blog and will not return.
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Nice take
This, I like...although not what I was expecting from the title. :) It's one of those poems that you read and go, Sonofabitch, I wish I'd thought of that. Well-placed line breaks, a reference to the Apocolyptic horseman Death, and the proper devilbedamned attitude with your word choices (good use of "godforsaken") made this a pleasure to read. It will stick with me.
Donna Smith
Thank you!
I appreciate that a great deal, especially since I admire your poetry very much.
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Scott