Yep!
I arched my back towards
The moon
As it spun off a distinctive
Orange glow
The pure dispersion of light
Lifting my cheekbones-
Jostling its natural glory
It’s magnificence!
Wonder!
And worldly sage.
It set my mind spinning-
Are you real I thought...
-‘Is anybody up there?’
***********************
‘yep!’ he replied.
© Deborah Gordon 2008
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whimsical, delicious humor, debs...
Never thought of God using slang, but He's God, so I guess He could! Loved it! joyce
The Moon!
Thanks Joyce this was a little off beat I know! but I was imagining the Moon and its ultimate wisdom and what it would say to us if it could. 'Yep' seemed like the funniest thing!
DEbs x
ah Debs....
that was great, loved the ending...nice write, peace.
Thanks!
Many thanks repenter for the feedback, as always.
Debs :.)
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Deborah --
I love the mystery and enchantment of this one.
Do it again!
Mark Pearce
www.marzguy.deviantart.com
:.)
Thanks mark.
DEbs