Today I’ll Play

Today I’ll play at being great
Today I’ll play at being blithe
I’ll gather up a tramp or five
And have them round for tea and cake.

Today I’ll play at being neat
Today I’ll help both young and old
I’ll guard them from impending cold
I’ll help them cross the street.

Today I’ll play at being swell
I'll help the poor without delay
I’ll give my finest suit away
I’ll lend them boots aswell.

Today I’ll offer tea and cake!
Today I’ll climb the Empire State!
Today I’ll shine for goodness sake!
Today I’ll play at being great!

© Deborah Gordon 2009

Loved this Debs

I loved this one great rhythm to it also something refreshingly different huggs from Willow

Thanks, Wills

Thanks Wills, you know it was funny I was listening to this lady speak today and telling a group of us, all these good deeds that she does... I think it was the way she said it that made me feel it wasn't genuine. I don't know, but it inspired me to write this.

Debs
xxx

I know the feeling Debs

People that are genuine dont tell everybody what good they have done, and those that do are very unimpressing to me, great point made here, hugs from Willow

Spot On!

Spot on, Wills! My feelings exactly.

Debs
xx

Nice

Mind if I play at being nice? That was the best poem I ever read. You should write poetry!
He, he, he.
I liked this little doggerell. The facades we all play, eh? I hope you find time to actually live today too.
Good write.

Tom W

Shut off the tube if you want a true reality show
Engage the mind, not the mindless

Thanks

Thanks, Tom. Yeah, its nice to do things humbly rather than make a great performance out of things. I guess we all just like reconition.

Debs

DEBs

This is adorably fun!!!
You always come up with something different..i love that about you.
Linda

Hey, Linda

Hey, Linda. Thanks for your kind comments here. Glad you saw the humour in this one!

DEbs
xx

Random acts of Kindness We

Random acts of Kindness
We all hope will find us

Nice one Debs

Ray AKA Yobarney

Nice..

Nice little rhyme you've got going on there, lol!
Thanks for taking the time to comment ray.

DEbs

People always say they do

People always say they do all these things "today" but then they go back to being worthless bastards and doing nothing but consuming fast food, watching TV, littering, and wasting air. I sense a hidden sarcasm in this or maybe it's just me. Good write anyway, Debs. I like you.

:.)

Hi, Neo. I like you too freind.
I suppose if anything, its sarcastic humour really. Just my take on a society were (some) people 'Play At' rather than 'Do' good deeds. Anyways, Its not so much a moral piece, just irony here. But its interesting to see how people behave sometimes and I end up asking myself, whats in it for them?

Kind thanks as always

DEbs
xx

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