The Moon
Now keep this to yourself
I stole the moon earlier
It sure looks good upon my shelf.
No doubt you’ll think this wrong, dear lord
(This moon theft)
Alas I was a little bored.
I have begun to notice though, a sense of sorrow
Big sad moon face
I’ll go back for the stars tomorrow.
© Deborah Gordon 2009
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lol loved this one
ha ha Debs another of your great funnies loved it, save a star for me, huggs from Willow
Sure Will..
I sure will Willow. I'll save the very best one for you!
DEbs
xx
Aww..debs
I feel sad for the moon...missing his friends and all. (sniff)
If this were a childrens book, you'd see me crying...LOL I'm not kidding. Until, you went back for the stars...what a happy ending that would be!
Gee Debs...maybe you should write a childrens book???? Its an absolutely perfect story for little kids...isnt it? I am so serious...you should do it!
Thanks, Lindz..
Thanks, Lindz, that's really sweet of you to say.
It would be great to write a children's book in the future. Maybe one day. I like some of the illustrations they use aswell, and have a freind who's a great artist who is doing some work for me at the mo.
I'll send you some of her work through if you like, its amazing!
DEbs
xx
Yes
Debs, I'd love that, thanks!!
How strange
that just this night I went out my back deck and hung a moon. Much to my shagrin I returned to my humble abode "Moon-less" Now I know who the thief in the night is.
:)
ron
:.)
Ron, you're funny. That brought a smile to my face!
DEbs
x
Werewolf
Sometimes when it's a full moon out I turn into a werewolf. Then I shave and watch the "Jermemy Kyle Show."
:.)
LOL! I can picture that Neo....Do you wear your pink tutu as well?
DEbs
x
OF COURSE I WEAR MY PURPLE TUTU!!!!!!!!!!!
But of course! What else does one wear when turning into a werewolf and watching the "Jeremy Kyle Show?"
I was wondering why the tides were so high
I love original unique ideas like this one ... Great job... I was wondering why the tides were so high!
Ray AKA Yobarney
Its Fun..
Thanks, ray. It's fun to write nonsense sometimes. There's no point in writing if we can't enjoy it now and then. Appreciate your words.
DEbs
Do You Steal To Order???
I was just wondering if you could maybe half inch all the clouds this summer so that it stays dry and sunny! Also wondered if you would be willing to sell one of the stars you're going to take? I'm prepared to pay cash for it!
Interesting piece Miss Squirel, enjoyed the read very much,
Dave
I'll See...
I'll see what I can do Dave, but no promises...They're clamping down on this star pinching thingy at the mo.
There's a slice of the moon up for grabs if you're interested though.
DEbs
x
I shall sneak
through your shelf... after you had taken all the stars... you cannot hide them anyway!!!
... and I will bring with me many wishes they may be granted at once...
I am excited how you will do the constellation...
LOL I love this one!
I like your mood these days... so upbeat such contagious one!
clairejane
:.)
Thanks Claire,
Its fun to be silly sometimes, and too escape into a dreamy poem.
DEbs
xx
You, my dear, are a Goddess among poets
For whom else but a goddess could have the power to snatch the moon and the stars? And I, but a humble mortal, am in awe of your imagination and talent.
Take all the stars you wish, but leave us the brightest and most beautiful star in the heavens - the one with your name on it!
XOX tj