That Silent Place

I retire
Into my silent place
That warmth
That light
That grace
Those hands that embrace me
Amidst the cold, dire, hatred of man
And the eyes that see
So much, of who I am
And what I
Can be.

I retire

Passing through many gates
Of late
I pass through words
That have been served upon me

Remnants of fear -

It is here
Where I recline
And where I shine within a tear.

© Deborah Gordon 2008

WOW

Very good write!!
AZEAGL31

Enjoyed this much.

I really enjoyed this. Heh, made me just stare and go WOW! Thanks for the comments on my poems and stuff. Wow, though. =]
Cassie.

Debs this was

A great write , intense, and heartfelt loved it hugs from Willow

Thankyou!

Many thanks to all of you for your kind comments...really appreciate that.

DEbs

Ehh.

Eh, I know this is out of the blue, but I was wondering if you'd give me your thoughts on one of my poems. It's called Her. and the reason being is that I just love your comments. Please and fank youuu. =]
Cassie.

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