Sunstruck
Today I shall sit- writing poetry,
Before me: the sun,
Energetic.
I am making use of its -
Muscle-ripped body,
Ferocity
Whilst the swallows float pass - almost inaudibly
A measure perhaps of imminent beauty.
© Deborah Gordon 2009
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sun
Living out there in Britain, you really do appreciate the sun because you so rarely see it... Hope you make the most of your day, and I love this serene painting of words that you've done here.
rain
For sure, all we seem to be getting recently is rain....followed by more rain....and wha d'yer know, still more rain!
Gotta make the most of the good days.
Thanks for the comments friend,
Ta ta for a bit,
Debs~
I'm...
Awestruck! I just love this one debs...kinda says what we all do, right? we sit and write poetry...but we never sit and write about writing it... :)
really clever Debs, you have such a way about you. So sweetly, writing about nature.
xoxo
Lindz
Ta
thanks, friend
you say the sweetest things!
DeBs~