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I swell and I writhe-I am tipsy
Soon he will beg of me
To spill out my thighs
Thumb-print his cock on my irises
Lean back and rock,
On womb-warm skin
With lips which secure him
Like freshly wound coils
Primed for bursting
Bubbling oils erupting
Sugar-lump kisses
To finish him.
© Deborah Gordon 2009
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My oh my
Debs,
your last few poems are sooooooooo hot hot hot !!! Either your man is away on business and your missing him OR you have mistaken Viagra for your Viatimns and you man has been working over time. In anycase YOU GO GIRL :)
ron
"It ain't what they call you, it's what you answer to." W.C. Fields
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Racy
Thanks Ron, this one's kinda racy I know,
Must have been something I ate recently or too many E- numbers!
Thanks for the comments as always,
Debs ~
~Mamma Mia~
Debz,
I am with Ron...Wow...you lucky girl. I am writing about flowers and you are writing about FLOWERS! It must be nice to have a magnifying glass for this kind of action. Beautiful writing!
Warm regards,
Kathy
Flowers
Thanks Kath,
Similar things in a way! :.)
Thanks for your warm comments here,
Debs~
oxygen
I think I need an oxygen mask after reading this. You're outta control, Debs! OUTTA CONTROL!!!!!! And I like it.
Slide
...I've just posted you one over,
and an extra one for Fred as well if he needs it!
Kind thanks friend!
Debs~
Debs?
I think the trip to Greece might have triggered all this...lol
i'm liking this alot.... but you knew i would...!!!
great lusty write!
Lindz
Heat
It was 32 degrees celsius out there,
a constant stream of endless sunshine,
fine wine and moonlit tavernas
I think you could be right Lindz :.) Thanks friend!
Debs ~
steaming
I'm ashamed to admit it, but.... but... better yet, I won't. Smoking girl. Exquisite job. Mad ups.
lynett,
Thanks for your comment here,
most appreciated!
Debs ~
delectable
what more can i say
delectable
what more can i say
Thanks
Thanks queachy,
Debs~
Wow!
Holy crap! .. lol Excellent passionate write Deb! Right up my alley. hehe. I could feel this one.. beautiful.
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:.)
ah, thanks Guy,
that's a kind thing to say-glad you enjoyed friend!
Debs~