Flame

Not for the sun or the stars above
Their piercing heat, and golden lamps ablaze
We bathe in glory follow in their ways
But more for the years and the deeds that invigour us
For hidden tears, and memories of kind
At first we shun and vehemently ignore
But loves design will conquer this and more
If hearts align and hands confirm
And so allow our lights to burn
To blissfully proclaim
We’d surely have men feel the same.

© Deborah Gordon 2009

Brilliant write

Debs you have done it again, another Brilliant write,you are amazingly good with your poems and so constant also,I loved this one as I do all your writes, huggs from Willow.

Thankyou

Thanks for your encouraging words, Wills. You're very kind.

Debs
xx

This is a beautiful poem

This is a beautiful poem Debs... I don't know what is wrong with us men...It has to be that darn testosterone!

Happy Valentine's Day!

Ray AKA Yobarney

:.)

Thankyou Ray.

Very unique poem, Debs. No

Very unique poem, Debs. No one does love poems like you.

Hi There

Hi, Neo. Lovely to hear from you again
kind thanks freind.
xx

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