Flame

It is a tongue,
Surrendering itself to lips, and a heart
That dips
And there they will be held
Within a naked kiss.
And within smiles
And the comings and goings of limbs
And upon his loins
I will begin
As I growl
And the thunder roars
And we are drawn upon an ocean of
Clawing.

And he breathes, with his fierce hands
And my lungs sob
And our souls complain.

We are burning upon, endless flame
And upon waters of flesh
And we are eating the moisture from our necks.

© Deborah Gordon 2008

beautiful Debs

This was beautiful Debs a great sensuous love poem loved it hugs from Willow

Thankyou

Many thanks Willow. x

The Tag Says Passion

And passion it most certainly is! Good write Debs,
Dave

Passion

Thankyou Dave, i'm a very passionate person! and Pablo Neurda and many other fine poets on this forum inspire me.

Oh DebS

very well you can weave lines such as these!
my boyfriend enjoy this kind of poem! ;-)
claire

Hi Claire

Thanks for your comments again, thats really sweet and I hope you both enjoy it together! :.)

Flame

D.Rafmaninoff
very intense and descriptive narration of a couple engaged in love-making! I enjoyed the imagery. d.r.

Thanking You

Many thanks dr :.)

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