Pharaoh
I suppose it is the way he stares
What a thrill!
Eyelids that lose themselves in me
The smell of honey, and the smell of sleep
Curved, snailing muscles flexing
Bursting from the bone
Killer ribs -
That both please me and injure me
One wrong move and I’ll be done for
Incapable of walking.
His mouth opening and closing
Like a blessed temple.
© Deborah Gordon 2009
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mmm...liking this ...
Very nice Debs! Sensually wriiten as only you can do it!!!
Love it!!!
Lindz
Thankyou
Thanks Lindz,
It was a fun one to write!
Debs
xx
Is this a squirrel hunting story? :)
I hope his tongue doesn’t move like a mummy :)
Cheers,
Iouri
Ubi vita, ibi poesis!
squirrel
are there squirrels in Britain too? lol
seriouslydave
Squirrels..
Squirrels galore mate!
Debs :.)
Nope, Its A PHARAOH Hunting Story:.)
.....I was kinda hoping his tonque, would move like a mummy *wink*
Thanks Iouri,
Debs
Then,
The story was about a faro
Who likes to wink (while hunting squirrels) ;)
Ubi vita, ibi poesis!
Ubi Vita, ibi Poesis!
Great take on it,
Love the imagination there.
Squirrels
The Ancient Egyptians were afraid of squirrels. Legend has it that one attacked a pharoah and bit off his ear. Squirrels were then banned from Egypt for thousands of years, and to this day aren't allowed in many Egyptian towns and cities.
brilliant Debs
loved this one lol love these ones you write good fun huggs from Willow
Thank You
Thanks Wills :.)
Squirrels
......I think I studied that in history class some years ago. :.)
Glad to see you back Debs
Writing great as usual
Total abstinence is so excellent a thing that it cannot be carried to too great an extent. In my passion for it I even carry it so far as to totally abstain from total abstinence itself.
Mark Twain June 11, 1881
Hey Beth!
Hey, Beth. Lovely to hear from you!
This is just a brief visit though.
Debs
xx
Brief or not it was good seeing your name
when I logged on. I don't come on here much anymore myself. Just stopped by to hassel Ron for a min and decided to read a few. Drop me a line sometime and let me know how you are doing.
Total abstinence is so excellent a thing that it cannot be carried to too great an extent. In my passion for it I even carry it so far as to totally abstain from total abstinence itself.
Mark Twain June 11, 1881
:.)
Will do. The same goes for me.
Debs
xx
I never knew the pharaoh had
I never knew the pharaoh had killer ribs, thats always good to know. Nice poem, written nicely.
Killer Ribs
Thanks Sina, just disapearing into my crazy imagination here for a while,
Nice to meet you and for adding me as a buddy!
Debs~
Hi, I love this poem, you
Hi, I love this poem, you inspire me. X
Pharaoh
Penny, that's a kind thing to say,
likewise friend!
Debs~