Blue
Now that you’re gone
The air is less blue
Insanity also is vanishing
As promptly as it entered me
Puffing on its last cigarette
Consuming, its ultimate breath
Unravelling from the walls and doors
The fibres of my clothes
To where the windows are
The sunlight has captured it
Eager to exchange -
Your cruel heart for my good one.
Now the sheets are clean
The pillow cases are ironed
Everything perfected like a polished shoe.
© Deborah Gordon 2009
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"Now the sheets are
"Now the sheets are clean
The pillow cases are ironed
Everything perfected like a polished shoe."
Moving forward can be refreshing. Really dug this write, Debs. Your style is awesome.
That Means So Much..
That means so much to me Neo,
Thanks heaps for taking the time to comment friend.
Debs ~
wow debs
I love the mental and physical visuals here. It's obvious a clean slate happening in this one.
A breath of fresh air, this one is my friend!!!!
Nice Debs
I love this.
Lindz
XOXO
:)
Blue..
I guess you figured it was a personal work here Lindz, and you'd be spot on friend,
I still find it amazing that after many years past, we are able to recall experiences and use them creatively,
All part of the healing process no doubt!
Debs
xxx
Yes my friend!
So true what you say..."after many years past, we are able to recall experiences and use them creatively"
One BIG smile over here, sent to you Debs!!
xoxo
Lindz!!!