Between Breaths

Simple
Everything is flowing through the air
As if driven
Much the same as affection could be given
Settle in a moment of tenderness, care.

The proud clouds are shifting
And the sky is duly lit

It is one heaven only with your name on it

© Deborah Gordon 2009

aww, Debs how sweet

Such a tender write. Love and nature together...love "the proud clouds"...and only one heaven....with his name on it...
Love it Debs!
Lindz
:)

:.)

Thank you kind friend,

Debs
xx

Between Breaths

joseph l. gause

Good, Scary squirel!

Free prose, and good free thoughts

Joe

Hey, thanks Joe

Thanks for your kind comments on this one.

Debs ~

Publish Here or Elsewhere

joseph l. gause

Scareysquirel:

I must say you are an unsual person, but your poetry talent is
unmistakeable.

If I had a 48-line mini-saga about a North American Indian tribe,
could I safely print it here for your and others enjoyment , while
safe guarding the fact that it was I who wrote it?

I ask your advice Scareysquirel--Regards your friend Joe

Hi, Joseph

Thanks for the kind comments again,

In terms of safe guarding your work, most people choose to place a copyright symbol on theirs or simply print their name at the end of it. The site itself though automatically protects the writer, as each poem is individually time stamped. What this really means is that, if another copies your work the site will have a record of when you first posted it, thus proving you were the original author. Sadly, it will happen from time to time, but there are steps you can take to 'safeguard' and a hefty fine for those who get caught. Most will be respectful of your writing though.

Pls do share any writing you have with me and others, I look foward to reading your thoughts.

Hope this clarify's a little.

Debs~

Safeguarding

joseph l. gause

Scareysquirel:

I took your advice. Please see my blog entry " The Ghosts of Gotorokan"--Enjoy!

Cheers,--Joe

fresh

like a breath of spring air, it's so nice to have you back in here posting! Such a simplistic, enjoyable read Debs, it is always a pleasure when I see your posts!~Ron

*"whenever in doubt, dream...inspiration will happen when you least expect it.." r/k 2-2009
http://members.tripod.com/Ron_Kinard

:.)

Aah, thanks so much Ron, you're very kind. It's a real pleasure just to be able to share poetry here, and to recieve comments such as yours!

Debs ~

beauty

You write with such elegance and beauty, Debs. It's always a treat to read you.

Bless You

Bless You Neo...That's a really kind thing to say,
Thank you heaps friend!

Debs~

I like the descriptions in

I like the descriptions in it... Very well done Debs :)
Ouady

Ouady,

It's so lovely to hear from you again friend,
thanks so much for dropping by!

Debs :.)

A tender and moving verse,

A tender and moving verse, thank you!

Hi, Lee

It's nice to meet you!

Thank You for your kind comments here.

Debs ~

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