Between Breaths
Simple
Everything is flowing through the air
As if driven
Much the same as affection could be given
Settle in a moment of tenderness, care.
The proud clouds are shifting
And the sky is duly lit
It is one heaven only with your name on it
© Deborah Gordon 2009
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aww, Debs how sweet
Such a tender write. Love and nature together...love "the proud clouds"...and only one heaven....with his name on it...
Love it Debs!
Lindz
:)
:.)
Thank you kind friend,
Debs
xx
Between Breaths
joseph l. gause
Good, Scary squirel!
Free prose, and good free thoughts
Joe
Hey, thanks Joe
Thanks for your kind comments on this one.
Debs ~
Publish Here or Elsewhere
joseph l. gause
Scareysquirel:
I must say you are an unsual person, but your poetry talent is
unmistakeable.
If I had a 48-line mini-saga about a North American Indian tribe,
could I safely print it here for your and others enjoyment , while
safe guarding the fact that it was I who wrote it?
I ask your advice Scareysquirel--Regards your friend Joe
Hi, Joseph
Thanks for the kind comments again,
In terms of safe guarding your work, most people choose to place a copyright symbol on theirs or simply print their name at the end of it. The site itself though automatically protects the writer, as each poem is individually time stamped. What this really means is that, if another copies your work the site will have a record of when you first posted it, thus proving you were the original author. Sadly, it will happen from time to time, but there are steps you can take to 'safeguard' and a hefty fine for those who get caught. Most will be respectful of your writing though.
Pls do share any writing you have with me and others, I look foward to reading your thoughts.
Hope this clarify's a little.
Debs~
Safeguarding
joseph l. gause
Scareysquirel:
I took your advice. Please see my blog entry " The Ghosts of Gotorokan"--Enjoy!
Cheers,--Joe
fresh
like a breath of spring air, it's so nice to have you back in here posting! Such a simplistic, enjoyable read Debs, it is always a pleasure when I see your posts!~Ron
*"whenever in doubt, dream...inspiration will happen when you least expect it.." r/k 2-2009
http://members.tripod.com/Ron_Kinard
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Aah, thanks so much Ron, you're very kind. It's a real pleasure just to be able to share poetry here, and to recieve comments such as yours!
Debs ~
beauty
You write with such elegance and beauty, Debs. It's always a treat to read you.
Bless You
Bless You Neo...That's a really kind thing to say,
Thank you heaps friend!
Debs~
I like the descriptions in
I like the descriptions in it... Very well done Debs :)
Ouady
Ouady,
It's so lovely to hear from you again friend,
thanks so much for dropping by!
Debs :.)
A tender and moving verse,
A tender and moving verse, thank you!
Hi, Lee
It's nice to meet you!
Thank You for your kind comments here.
Debs ~