Untitled Cheesy Love Poem

My love, you are so wonderful,
so radiant and so beautiful,
and just as the ocean is deep and blue,
my love for you is strong and true.

I dream of you all the time,
and long for you every night,
this love I feel will never grow old,
your tender touch is the rainy day
that waters the flowers of my soul.

o lord, why must you torment me with
this most beautiful creature,
this maiden with ever so lovely features,
I ache endlessly whenever we part,
and feel as though I am missing
a piece of my heart.

...cheesy, but true...

Not cheesey at all,

Not cheesey at all, SammyRayJR. I like the feelings you express here. Sometimes I think myself that it should almost be illegal some of the things a woman can do to your mind. Nice write. Peace, NSF

Thanks

Hey, Just wanted to say thanks for the comment on my poem "Untitled Cheesy Love Poem"

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