if you don't see
if your eyes don't see what you did to me
I will give you my eyes try see with my eyes
see the love that's killing me and know what's in me
from my word my looks and my hand touch
come more closer come close to me fill me up with your love
till my heart touch your heart till my soul touch your soul
I miss you
every time i look to mirror i see you in front of me
closer to myself and my heart and my love
my eyes doesn't leave one second even my dreams
with moments and seconds your with me and my days
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Just Wondering
I was just wondering if you wrote that poem to express how bad that love makes you feel or in the other hand how good it is? I'm just a bit confused.
Other than that, it's pretty good. (But that comment might not be worthy since I didn't understand the essence of your poem.)
Hi Clouds
in fact I am not good or have a talent to write poems. English is my second language. Any way I try to express my feeling in that love. I think is very sweet and nice to have some one to love. However, love hurts me. I do not have hope to be with my lover. at the end my love is bad and sweet :) .... bad because there is no hope, sweet because I feel I am in love or I can dream. I have a lot of pain in this love ..... I am really confused. I tried to forget her, but I feel I do love her more.
thanks for your comment