Avenger

I will avenge their deaths,

You killed my loves with no remorse,
And left me to let pain take its course,
I was stricken, gripped by pain,
I felt nothing was left to gain
But then something else had set in,
The hate of the one who did this sin,
The hate set me on a course with haste,
And I can’t stop until I get the taste,
The bitter but sweet taste of revenge,
I’ll get to taste when I avenge,
I don’t care about being taken by the dark,
I just know I’m gonna rip out your heart,
You didn’t have to be so cruel,
But now this will end in a duel,
This must end now here in,
I summon you great Kirin,
I taste the great taste of revenge,
But then I just stood up again,
There you are standing tall,
I feel like I’m about to fall,
You come over to take my eye,
Then you come, fallover and die,
Now I find you are my brother,
And the evil was all others,
Now I must avenge you,
Because that’s just what I have to do,

Revenge is not the cure for the problem,
It’s the ailment.

What great insight and depth

What great insight and depth you have. A really creative way to get your point across!
Keep writing! You have a lot of talent!

Blessings,
Jean

thanks

thank u i try ^_^
From Darkness to Darkness

Hear hear!

strong and emotive with such a powerful point that comes across-just amazing! :D ♥

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