Never More
I looked at the mirror,
not seeing me.
I saw what people wanted me to see,
but never more.
I talked with people,
but not about what I wanted to talk about.
I acted like everyone around me,
but never more.
I want to be myself from now on.
Showing my inside,
and not just what's on the outside.
Never more will I be afraid of others eyes.
They can't hurt me or take away who I am
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This is great!
Nice writing Rylee...I think at some point in our lives we all realize we just have to be our authentic self! and thats the best way to be!
I love this poem!
Linda
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thanks
I really appreciate you taking the time to read my poem and comment on it. I am glad you like it.
Rylee
Interesting Write
And I agree with what you've wriiten too. I think most people are guilty of acting and saying what's expected of them, but there does come a time when some realise that it's better to say or act as YOU feel and hang whatevers expected. Being true to yourself is important.
Right now I've bored you to tears, I'll go! Lol
Good write,
Dave
Thanks for commenting
I have been fighting with myself on this for a really long time. I finally reached a point this year where I see it really doesn't matter what others think as long as I am happy with myself, and this poem kind of proves to myself that I am planing to show others who I really am. Thanks for taking the time to comment. I really appreciate it.
Rylee
I was always such a
I was always such a chameleon. It took me years to even figure out what I really believed because I took on the beliefs of those around me. I was afraid to say what I thought until I found out what others thought. What if they don't like me? What if they think I'm a loser? That is one of the things I gain from writing. I can look at something on paper or screen and see me. When other people see it and like it, that's cool. When I feel good about it, that's great! I guess this comment goes to this, and your other post. Keep putting yourself out there!
I always feared rejection
I always feared rejection from those around me, but I really don't want to have to worry about what people think about me anymore. That was the point of this poem.
Thanks for commenting John.
Rylee