Secrets

Tell me a secret
that no one knows,
I’ll tell you one of mine.

Share a deed
that has been hid,
a crossing of the line.

Dig down deep
I’m sure there’s one
filed in your private Hell.

I keep mine buried
in my soul,
till He toll’s the bell.

So you think you’re special
or quite unique,
nothing’s new under the sun.

Actions, words,
look’s we hoped would kill,
or would have with a gun.

Do you remember when
out with your friends,
off came the wedding ring?

Or when in Vegas
you rolled the dice,
bud-da-boom then bud-da-bing?

Sharing my secrets
I must be ready,
entirely, I now know.

When pain of holding onto them
exceeds fears
of letting go.

Copyright © 2007 Ronald J. Edwards

this is really good

poem about taking a step towards healing, scary, painful, shameful all at the same time you put it all in here in a few phrases. I enjoyed reading it. Also seemed to me to have a bit of strength to it in the end, letting go. raskin

5th Step

Ronald J. Edwards
Trinity Ink
http://trinityinkexperiencestrengthandhope.blogspot.com

Raskin, the only way to leave the past is sharing it with vigorous honesty. Only then can I move forward with healing and growth.
Therein lies the 5th step.
Thanks for reading and commenting
ron

its a very well written

its a very well written piece...

:)

Ronald J. Edwards
Trinity Ink
http://trinityinkexperiencestrengthandhope.blogspot.com

thank you mimi
ron

Ron

Wow, the more I read your poems, the more I see how poetry comes straight from our hearts!
Nice write again Ron
Linda
:)

:)

Ronald J. Edwards
Trinity Ink
http://trinityinkexperiencestrengthandhope.blogspot.com

thank you linda for your kind words,
pssst here is a secret (***********)
:)
ron

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