Oh How Heavy

Oh how heavy my fear is
Oh how heavy my anger can be
Oh how heavy my guilt is
Oh how heavy these all seem to me

Free from the fear I walk bolder
Free from the anger I must let it go
Free from the guilt I stand taller
Free from the weight and the undertow

Oh how heavy my thoughts are
Oh how heavy the load in my cart
Oh how heavy my tears are
Oh how heavy the pain in my heart

Free from the thoughts opens my thinking
Free from the load I move effortlessly
Free from my tears I see clearly
Free from the pain I live life joyfully

Copyright © 2007 Ronald J. Edwards

Sounds...

All sounds, abit heavy to me Ron lol! Sorry coulden't resist that one.

Like the 'Freeing up' of things, I think the pain and strife we meet in this life, is paramount in this process. Could we ever be truly free, without them?...Are they companions working in unison?...
Just thoughts- from that deep thinking mind of mine lol!

Take care,

Debs x

:)

Ronald J. Edwards
Trinity Ink
http://trinityinkexperiencestrengthandhope.blogspot.com

way to deep for me
ron

This is very different from

This is very different from your normal writes. Like it.

anna

:)

Ronald J. Edwards
Trinity Ink
http://trinityinkexperiencestrengthandhope.blogspot.com

i guess i have gone thru changes , i wrote this poem feb of 2007 along with many other deep feeling works,
glad you liked it
ron

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