An Illegal Sin

This is my best work so far. I've put my everything into this. I would appreciate it if you read it and commented on it :)

Those sharp green eyes that stare
That blazing red hair of hers
Those carved pink lips that were shut when you did your sin
That 10 year old body left bruised when you tied her up like a pin
Those little hands of her struggling when you held her wrists so tight to fuck her like a bitch.
That mind of her wondering, daddy, what is it that you're doing?

Her innocence told me. It whispered to me, saying
"I was a kid; I didn’t know what he was doing
But I knew his mind was away, and what he was doing is wrong
Why would a father hurt his daughter so strong?
Mommy, why was I the one to give him pleasure and not you?
Where were you when I screamed silently during the misdeed?

As you kept stabbing into my innocence
And even though I was a virgin, I felt no pain
Coz I kept asking myself what is it that you're doing
What is it that my 10 year old mind can't understand?
Why did my heart hurt and my lungs burst when I looked at you that night?
It's because your hand was on my mouth as you kept saying "daddy loves you and he won't hurt you"

Did you people read through my lyrics as I say:
"I guess you couldn't find a way to let me learn
You took my innocence away
But the best of me stayed"
Did you? Or were you too busy relating the song to yourself
Coz to you I'm the one who's self obsessed.

Even now, as I told the world what happened to me through a song and a movie
All I am to them is coke head that must do her duty
They are too blinded to see the real Lindsay and what happened to me
All we want is to judge others to forget our own flaws and disgrace
And with that I end up my case
These are the true confessions of my broken heart"

hey, i don't know if this is

hey, i don't know if this is a real life experience or just a write, but i can relate to it. it brought back the haunting memories.very beautifully written and soul-felt. i hope nobody has to go through this ever.

Thank you :)

thank you for ur comment :) i really appreciate it.
its a real life experience :) and i hope no one goes through it too :) thank u again!

its a pleasure. keep going

its a pleasure. keep going on....hope of a better tomorrow is all we have. hugs.

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