I Give You My Nothing
I get better with time
Like wine
Let me whine
Years of tears and joy
I just break it down
One day at a time
I sleep but I haven’t rest
I cry but I haven’t confessed
I’ve done a lot but I haven’t seen anything
Nothing
I have nothing left to give
I am worth nothing
I am for nothing
I just want to hide and sigh
Forever
The release of my breath is the release of my anger
The release of my anger is the end of me
The end of me is all of I have
I can offer you nothing
Even the birds have something to offer
Even the earth has somewhere to retreat
Even a newborn child can find peace
Where does that leave me?
I am only as great as I am perceived
I am only as worthless and I can possibly be
Ill give you my all
Ill give you my nothing
I can be easily molded
Because I am nothing
Nothing can be shaped
Nothing can be formed
You just have to start from nothing
Nothing can be filled
Nothing can be made
Nothing can be done
Nothing will never fade
Nothing
Empty
Without
The lack of
Without presence
Nothing is nothing without something to be compared to
Nothing
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Robert, I like this.
I think we all have to learn to love and be at peace with ourselves first and then when that certain someone comes along we can be more with them. I really like the way you wrote this; even the title!
Nice going
Linda
I give nothing
I dig the philosophical nature of this. Welcome to the Showcase, Robert.
Beautiful piece...
I love your title, "I give you my nothing"
This poem left me thinking, philosophizing, and contemplating... love it love it love it...
I've realized that the more you try to judge people and things, the less you will see and understand them for what they really are. Ironically, we are always our own worst critics. Perhaps that's why self-acceptance is often one's toughest battle in life, and a battle that is not won overnight, but one day at a time. There are innumerable things in life that we can not and will not be able to understand, so why waste our time trying. All we can do is attempt to figure ourselves out, which is a major feat within itself. There are certain things I have accepted about myself, and others I am working on, but realizing this phenomenon is the first step. It's far better than living a life based on other people's opinions and expectations.
hi Robert that was beatiful,
hi Robert that was beatiful, i think i love it so much because i relate to it, you must have real pain inside to write something like this.
Thank you
Thank you all for the wonderful comments. I have so much going on right now and so much to say. I look forward to sharing with you more.